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I dragged the body into the bushes. I sprinted the rest of the way to Nate's house. I stopped at Nate's gate to catch my breath. Huge mistake. The last thing I felt before everything went black was a sharp pain in my head.

I came to on a large operating table. There were large leather straps holding me down. Nothing a little vampiric strength couldn't fix. I pulled up with all my might waiting for them to snap. They didn't. I realized how tired and powerless I felt. The only thing that could sap my powers was...garlic. Looking around me I could see garlic all over everything. These guys are prepared, whoever they are.

Then I noticed two other people in the room. Two men with long white lab coats. They had patches on the outside of their lab coats the same as the man that attacked me earlier. Vampire slayers.

Then i noticed the scalpels in their hands. They were going to dissect something and i had a sneaking suspicion that something was me.

Then one of the huge windows on the left side of the room shatters. A man jumps into the room. He whips out a gun and shoots the two lab coat guys in the head before they can react. They're dead before they hit the floor. He runs over and unstraps me, grabs me by the arm, and we're off. We jump out the window. He throws me into a black Porsche and peels out.

Half an hour later I ask "Who are you?" I haven't asked yet because I've been in shock.

"You should know," he grunts and turns so i can see his face clearly for the first time.

I do know him. From ten weeks ago.

"I know you! You're...you're..." I stammer.

"Alden Nocturne at your service!" he interrupts.

"The one who turned me into a vampire..." I finish.

"Yes that too."

TO BE CONTINUED...
Part 2 of my Blood Crow story
oooooooh new character!
Hope you like it!
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LilyLupine64 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
OH SHIT IT'S GARLIC!!!! :iconohnoesohplz:
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darklyDemonic Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
IKR!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sparrf Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow scary D:
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darklyDemonic Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ya
is it good?
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Sparrf Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
stuff is happening pretty fast, I'd put more detail in, but yes! I like it so far. 8D
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darklyDemonic Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
pffffft
screw detail
i dont do detail

Thanks xD
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Sparrf Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
but detail makes stuff fun to readdddd

<333
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darklyDemonic Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i dont care
im too lazy to do detail
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Sparrf Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SIGHS
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darklyDemonic Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yup
in the novel im writing i use more detail
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